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    annanaran

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    Join date : 2009-09-01

    Spirit Week

    Post  annanaran on Wed Oct 07, 2009 5:45 pm

    By: Anna Naran & Lena K.

    Posters were hung all over campus, costumes were zipped up, and AHS students of all grades enthusiastically roamed the campus during this year’s spirit week, also known as Super Week. From Oct. 19-23 freshmen, sophomores, juniors, and seniors took part in a super hero competition involving heroes from the Incredibles to the Justice League. Each grade was given a specific group of super heroes to dress up as. Raffle tickets were handed out and a prize of a new red iPod was given to the student with the most spirit.

    PARAGRAPH2: freshman
    -interview freshman that participated
    -include quotes
    -talk about what hero they were assigned to dress up as

    PARAGRAPH3: Sophomores
    -interview sophomores that participated
    -include quotes
    -talk about what hero they were assigned to dress up as

    PARAGRAPH4: juniors
    -interview juniors that participated
    -include quotes
    -talk about what hero they were assigned to dress up as

    PARAGRAPH5: seniors
    -interview seniors that participated
    -include quotes
    -talk about what hero they were assigned to dress up as

    **Whoever wins the final iPod will be mentioned in their grade level paragraph.

    All good things, even if not wanted, have to end. That wonderful week of reading posters and admiring cool superhero costumes had to end some time, right? Although only one person and class won the prize, each grade did an outstanding job at making their grade known to the rest of the school. Congratulations ______________ (grade that won) and ______ (name of person with best costume) for winning a red iPod!

    Joanna Shen

    Posts : 87
    Join date : 2009-08-31

    Re: Spirit Week

    Post  Joanna Shen on Tue Oct 13, 2009 3:19 am

    Posters were hung all over campus, costumes were zipped up, and AHS students of all grades enthusiastically roamed [watch out for parallel structure] the campus during this year’s spirit week, also known as Super Week. From Oct. 19-23[,] freshmen, sophomores, juniors, and seniors [all grade levels? to shorten and take out necessity of commas] took part in a super hero competition involving heroes from the Incredibles to the Justice League. Each grade was given a specific group of super heroes to dress up as. Raffle tickets were handed out and a prize of a new red iPod was given to the student with the most spirit.

    PARAGRAPH2: freshman
    -interview freshman that participated
    -include quotes
    -talk about what hero they were assigned to dress up as

    PARAGRAPH3: Sophomores
    -interview sophomores that participated
    -include quotes
    -talk about what hero they were assigned to dress up as

    PARAGRAPH4: juniors
    -interview juniors that participated
    -include quotes
    -talk about what hero they were assigned to dress up as

    PARAGRAPH5: seniors
    -interview seniors that participated
    -include quotes
    -talk about what hero they were assigned to dress up as

    **Whoever wins the final iPod will be mentioned in their grade level paragraph.

    All good things, even if not wanted [good things that aren't wanted? Rephrase], have to end.
    That wonderful week of reading posters and admiring cool superhero costumes had to end some time, right? Although only one person and class won the prize, each grade did an outstanding job at making their grade known to the rest of the school. Congratulations ______________ (grade that won) and ______ (name of person with best costume) for winning a red iPod! [rephrase last sentence; sounds like the grade won the free iPod too]

    lenakalemkiarian

    Posts : 166
    Join date : 2009-09-01

    Re: Spirit Week

    Post  lenakalemkiarian on Wed Oct 14, 2009 12:05 pm

    Posters were hung all over campus, costumes were zipped up, and AHS students of all grades roamed the campus during this year’s spirit week, also known as Super Week. From Oct. 19-23, all grade levels took part in a super hero competition involving heroes from the Incredibles to the Justice League. Each grade was given a specific group of super heroes to dress up as. Raffle tickets were handed out and a prize of a new red iPod was given to the student with the most spirit.

    PARAGRAPH2: freshman
    -interview freshman that participated
    -include quotes
    -talk about what hero they were assigned to dress up as

    PARAGRAPH3: Sophomores
    -interview sophomores that participated
    -include quotes
    -talk about what hero they were assigned to dress up as

    PARAGRAPH4: juniors
    -interview juniors that participated
    -include quotes
    -talk about what hero they were assigned to dress up as

    PARAGRAPH5: seniors
    -interview seniors that participated
    -include quotes
    -talk about what hero they were assigned to dress up as

    **Whoever wins the final iPod will be mentioned in their grade level paragraph.

    Unfortunately, all good things have to end. That wonderful week of reading posters and admiring cool superhero costumes had to end some time, right? Although only one person and class won the prize, each grade did an outstanding job at making their grade known to the rest of the school. Congratulations ______________ (person that won for best spirit) for getting the free red iPod and _____________ (grade level that won) for best decorations!

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