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    Joanna Liao


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    Post  Joanna Liao Mon May 10, 2010 11:35 pm

    There is a charming boy named Dawn,
    Who always texts me till dawn.
    She is clever, funny, and cute;
    And when I see her, I always go mute.
    Shall I confess before the school year is gone?

    I’ve made a lot of friends this year;
    They’ve helped me get over my fears.
    So to all of them I’d like to share
    A special thanks for the love and care.
    Fondly, their friend, (almost) Shakespeare.

    Behind me, in my tiresome AP Calculus class,
    Sits an Adonis, so perfect that everyone can’t help but harass.
    I want to defenestrate them and yell that he belongs to me.
    But sadly, he likes smart girls and in math I have a D.
    It’s times like these when I want nothing else but to hide in a crevasse.

    Every time I walk down D-Hall,
    Carrying my SAT books, AP books, textbooks and all,
    There are people so nasty and mean
    When I see them my face turns green.
    Whilst my books tumble down they have a ball.
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    andrewchang


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    Post  andrewchang Wed May 19, 2010 12:55 pm

    There is a charming boy [isn't Dawn a girl name? Also, you reference the name as 'her' down below] named Dawn,
    Who always texts me till dawn.
    She is clever, funny, and cute;
    And when I see her, I always go mute.
    Shall I confess before the school year is gone?

    I’ve made a lot of friends this year;
    They’ve helped me get over my fears.
    So to all of them I’d like to share
    A special thanks for the love and care.
    Fondly, their friend, (almost) Shakespeare.

    Behind me, in my tiresome AP Calculus class,
    Sits an Adonis, so perfect that everyone can’t help but harass.
    I want to defenestrate them and yell that he belongs to me.
    But sadly, he likes smart girls and in math I have a D.
    It’s times like these when I want nothing else but to hide in a crevasse.

    Every time I walk down D-Hall,
    Carrying my SAT books, AP books, textbooks and all,
    There are people so nasty and mean
    When I see them my face turns green.
    Whilst my books tumble down they have a ball [awkward phrasing, reword].

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