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    christopherchen

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    Rough: Speech and Debate Skeleton

    Post  christopherchen on Tue Nov 10, 2009 12:02 am

    competition on 21st

    Speech and Debate is composed of public speakers that fought for their rank in a competition Saturday.
    Since competing in an icebreaker in September and a Fall Debate in October, the team is now participating in a Speech Volley type competition for Novices and Junior Varsity. On the 21st of November at Gabrielino High School, each individual must win one round out of the three of each event. The opposition was [what team was up against] [quick, brutal, etc in what direction]. [Quote from winner about how it was or what they expected, hope for]. _____ had [what he/she had or hadn’t done before]. The competing was intense at the [what was intense, exciting- a highlight]. [Quote from spectator or coach/advisor of the event and the competition in general]. _____ [member, maybe quoted before] won____ and was [comment from person]. After _____ events (talk about how many, type of event), the Speech and Debate Team succeeded in _________ events or rounds. [Advisor, Captain or a few winners’ quotes]. [Sentence of the results in general and maybe an integrated quote]. [Sentence on future competitions or what the team will try to achieve next].

    ashleychi

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    Re: Rough: Speech and Debate Skeleton

    Post  ashleychi on Tue Nov 10, 2009 9:22 pm

    EDIT 1

    Speech and Debate is composed of public speakers that [delete] fought for their rank [insert 'amongst other schools'] in a competition Saturday.
    Since competing in an icebreaker [capitalize] in September and a Fall Debate in October, the team is now participating in [change to 'has been preparing for'] a Speech Volley type competition for Novices and Junior Varsity [JV]. On the 21st of November [Nov. 21] at Gabrielino High School, each individual must win one round out of the three of each event.[clarify & reword, it's a bit awk.] The opposition was [what team was up against] [quick, brutal, etc in what direction]. [Quote from winner about how it was or what they expected, hope for]. _____ had [what he/she had or hadn’t done before]. The competing was intense at the [what was intense, exciting- a highlight]. [Quote from spectator or coach/advisor of the event and the competition in general]. _____ [member, maybe quoted before] won____ and was [comment from person]. After _____ events (talk about how many, type of event), the Speech and Debate Team succeeded in _________ events or rounds. [Advisor, Captain or a few winners’ quotes]. [Sentence of the results in general and maybe an integrated quote]. [Sentence on future competitions or what the team will try to achieve next].

    christopherchen

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    Re: Speech and Debate Skeleton

    Post  christopherchen on Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:43 pm

    Speech and Debate Skeleton

    Speech and Debate fought for their rank amongst other schools in a competition Saturday.
    Since competing in an Icebreaker in September and a Fall Debate in October, the team has been preparing for a Speech Volley type competition for Novices and Junior Varsity (JV). The competition was on November 21st at Gabrielino High School. For each event in the competition, there are three rounds. For an individual to win a trophy, one must win a round per event. The opposition was [what team was up against] [quick, brutal, etc in what direction]. [Quote from winner about how it was or what they expected, hope for]. _____ had [what he/she had or hadn’t done before]. The competing was intense at the [what was intense, exciting- a highlight]. [Quote from spectator or coach/advisor of the event and the competition in general]. _____ [member, maybe quoted before] won____ and was [comment from person]. After _____ events (talk about how many, type of event), the Speech and Debate Team succeeded in _________ events or rounds. [Advisor, Captain or a few winners’ quotes]. [Sentence of the results in general and maybe an integrated quote]. [Sentence on future competitions or what the team will try to achieve next].

    ashleychi

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    Re: Rough: Speech and Debate Skeleton

    Post  ashleychi on Thu Nov 12, 2009 12:28 pm

    EDIT 2

    Speech and Debate fought for their rank amongst other schools in a competition Saturday. [replace with 'on Nov. 21']
    Since competing in an Icebreaker in September and a Fall Debate in October, the team has been preparing for a Speech Volley type competition for Novices and Junior Varsity (JV). The competition was on November 21st [Nov. 21][are you planning to mention this in the intro or right now?] at Gabrielino High School. For each event in the competition, there are three rounds. For an individual to win a trophy, one must win a round per event. The opposition was [what team was up against] [quick, brutal, etc in what direction]. [Quote from winner about how it was or what they expected, hope for]. _____ had [what he/she had or hadn’t done before]. The competing [competition]was intense at the [what was intense, exciting- a highlight]. [Quote from spectator or coach/advisor of the event and the competition in general]. _____ [member, maybe quoted before] won____ and was [comment from person]. After _____ events (talk about how many, type of event), the Speech and Debate Team succeeded in _________ events or rounds. [Advisor, Captain or a few winners’ quotes]. [Sentence of the results in general and maybe an integrated quote]. [Sentence on future competitions or what the team will try to achieve next].

    christopherchen

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    Re: Speech and Debate Skeleton

    Post  christopherchen on Thu Nov 12, 2009 10:00 pm

    EDIT 2

    Speech and Debate fought for their rank amongst other schools in a competition last Saturday.
    Since competing in an Icebreaker in September and a Fall Debate in October, the team has been preparing for a Speech Volley type competition for Novices and Junior Varsity (JV). The competition was on Nov. 21 at Gabrielino High School. For each event in the competition, there are three rounds. For an individual to win a trophy, one must win a round per event. The opposition was [what team was up against] [quick, brutal, etc in what direction]. [Quote from winner about how it was or what they expected, hope for]. _____ had [what he/she had or hadn’t done before]. The competition was intense at the [what was intense, exciting- a highlight]. [Quote from spectator or coach/advisor of the event and the competition in general]. _____ [member, maybe quoted before] won____ and was [comment from person]. After _____ events (talk about how many, type of event), the Speech and Debate Team succeeded in _________ events or rounds. [Advisor, Captain or a few winners’ quotes]. [Sentence of the results in general and maybe an integrated quote]. [Sentence on future competitions or what the team will try to achieve next].

    ashleychi

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    Re: Rough: Speech and Debate Skeleton

    Post  ashleychi on Sat Nov 14, 2009 12:13 am

    EDIT 3

    Speech and Debate fought for their rank amongst other schools in a competition last Saturday. [just say Nov. 21]
    Since competing in an Icebreaker in September and a Fall Debate in October, the team has been preparing for a Speech Volley type competition for Novices and Junior Varsity (JV). The competition was on Nov. 21 [again, only mention this one time in the article] at Gabrielino High School. For each event in the competition, there are three rounds. For an individual to win a trophy [delete], one must win a round per event. The opposition was [what team was up against] [quick, brutal, etc in what direction]. [Quote from winner about how it was or what they expected, hope for]. _____ had [what he/she had or hadn’t done before]. The competition was intense at the [what was intense, exciting- a highlight]. [Quote from spectator or coach/advisor of the event and the competition in general]. _____ [member, maybe quoted before] won____ and was [comment from person]. After _____ events (talk about how many, type of event), the Speech and Debate Team succeeded in _________ events or rounds. [Advisor, Captain or a few winners’ quotes]. [Sentence of the results in general and maybe an integrated quote]. [Sentence on future competitions or what the team will try to achieve next].

    christopherchen

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    Re: Speech and Debate Skeleton

    Post  christopherchen on Sat Nov 14, 2009 2:19 pm

    EDIT 3

    Speech and Debate fought for their rank amongst other schools in a competition last Saturday. Since competing in an Icebreaker in September and a Fall Debate in October, the team has been preparing for a Speech Volley type competition for Novices and Junior Varsity (JV). The competition was on Nov. 21 at Gabrielino High School. For each event in the competition, there are three rounds. For an individual to win, one must win a round per event. The opposition was [what team was up against] [quick, brutal, etc in what direction]. [Quote from winner about how it was or what they expected, hope for]. _____ had [what he/she had or hadn’t done before]. The competition was intense at the [what was intense, exciting- a highlight]. [Quote from spectator or coach/advisor of the event and the competition in general]. _____ [member, maybe quoted before] won____ and was [comment from person]. After _____ events (talk about how many, type of event), the Speech and Debate Team succeeded in _________ events or rounds. [Advisor, Captain or a few winners’ quotes]. [Sentence of the results in general and maybe an integrated quote]. [Sentence on future competitions or what the team will try to achieve next].

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