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    katherinebay


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    Post  katherinebay Tue Sep 08, 2009 11:24 pm

    From eleven to thirteen players, the girls varsity tennis team proved that this unlucky number actually has its perks. An increase in the number of players on the team truly proved that bigger really is better. Usually all of the other potential girls varsity tennis players are knocked back down to jv if they didn't make the team; however this expansion gave the varsity team a chance to include more promising players.

    Although the team had a minor set back during the summer, considering that they held tryouts in the summer, many, if not all, players individually practiced and perfected their skills. While hoping to achieve both personal and team goals, sophomore Caroline Young expects to "do very well in Pacific League."
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    Post  oisheeshemontee Fri Sep 11, 2009 6:55 pm

    [Growing in size] From eleven to thirteen players, the girls varsity tennis team proved[s] that this unlucky number actually has its perks. An increase in the number of players on the team truly proved that bigger really is better. [This last sentence seems repetitive – either combine the first two sentences or delete one of them] Usually, all of the other potential girls varsity tennis players are knocked back down to jv [JV] if they didn't make the team [upon not making the team]; however this expansion gave the varsity team a chance to include more promising players.

    Although the team had a minor set back [setback – one word] during the summer, considering that they held tryouts in the summer [This part doesn’t make sense – do you mean the setback was having to try out in the summer? Rephrase] , many, if not all, players individually practiced and perfected their skills [perfected their skills through individual practice]. While hoping to achieve both personal and team goals, sophomore Caroline Young expects to "do very well in Pacific League."
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    Post  katherinebay Sun Sep 13, 2009 10:15 am

    Growing in size from eleven to thirteen players, the girls varsity tennis team proves that this unlucky number actually has its perks, which shows that bigger really is better. Usually, all of the other potential girls varsity tennis players are knocked back down to JV upon not making the team; however this expansion gave the varsity team a chance to include more promising players. Senior Sheha Chintamaneni said, "our team is very strong this year, because we have 3 incoming freshmen, all very good players, and one incoming junior, and the rest are all returning varsity members, so it makes a stronger team than the past couple years."

    Although the team had a minor setback during the summer, considering that they held tryouts in the late summer and were not able to practice as a whole until then. Many, if not all, players perfected their skills through individual practice. While hoping to achieve both personal and team goals, sophomore Caroline Young expects to "do very well in Pacific League." Their first game of the season against Pasadena Polyechnic came to be such a stupendous start that they crushed them, ending with a score of 16-2.
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    Post  katherinebay Tue Sep 22, 2009 8:58 pm

    Growing in size from eleven to thirteen players, the girls varsity tennis team proves that this unlucky number actually has its perks, which shows that bigger really is better. Usually, all of the other potential girls varsity tennis players are knocked back down to JV upon not making the team; however this expansion gave the varsity team a chance to include more promising players. Senior Sheha Chintamaneni said, "our team is very strong this year, because we have 3 incoming freshmen, all very good players, and one incoming junior, and the rest are all returning varsity members, so it makes a stronger team than the past couple years."

    Although the team had a minor setback during the summer, considering that they held tryouts in the late summer and were not able to practice as a whole until then. Many, if not all, players perfected their skills through individual practice. While hoping to achieve both personal and team goals, sophomore Caroline Young expects to "do very well in Pacific League." Their first game of the season against Pasadena Polyechnic came to be such a stupendous start that they crushed them, ending with a score of 16-2. On Sep. 14, the girls varsity tennis played against Claremont and absolutely demolished them by winning 15-3. The next day, the team had Cresenta Valley as their opponent and once again beat them with a score of 13-5. Their winning streak continued as they beat Pasadena 17-1, Temple City 15-3, and Burbank 13-5.

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